Dark
Dark
It is the darkest of dark
An inky black of Carbon Sea
Where sky and water are of one
Where hell in its fury is unleashed
As it sweeps and swaggers
Upon all it surveys
Fury set ablaze
Its shadow cast upon sea and land
Every man, woman or child that falls
Beneath its breath
Beneath its gaze that witness
The spark and crackle of razor white rod
Cross black open sky
Snapping and roaring
Rolling and rumbling
A titan rising up from the deep
Its stomach
Thundering and grumbling
As its mighty scream reverberates and echo’s
A beginning before the main course
Its anger now unleashed
Snarling and growling
Falling upon any unfortunate craft caught
Crashing across whipped up waves
Of foam and fume
One moment a mountain
The next a valley
Terrified ships cling on to water’s edge
Riding and climbing
Descending and plying through
Brackish darkest green and black
Twisted wind and driven rain fall upon
Deck and sail
Creaking, snapping, tearing and ripping
Giant hands grip and pull
Tossing and throwing ships
As if mere toys
Finally when rage has run its course
All will become clear bright and blue
With no further sign or smell
Of blackened brimstone squall
No smoke to choke the very heart and lungs
Of all that bear witness to that which has gone before
Just the sweet, sharp tang of open sea
And clear blue horizon
Nothing left, no one to contest
Nothing to suggest what has occurred
But for skeleton of prow and mast
Now a place where Plank and barrel
Float on this glistening gloating pond
Bobbing and rubbing on to silver sand.......
By slurping gentle tide
Based loosely on turners painting 'the deluge'
Martin Elder
Fri 20th Nov 2015 17:54
Thanks Ray, Stu and Laura again for giving it a second reading I am really grateful for all your comments. It is good to get positive feedback from such brilliant poets, as yourselves Patricio and David. After a disappointing week this has made my day. Cheers !
My problem is that I have to resist the temptation to tinker with it any further.