shadow (a tanka horror story)
There are tiny burnt hands
Bursting through my inner walls
Bringing mercury
Where once my blood flowed through me
Gasping for air I thrash awake
Unsettled I rise
Finding not my wife’s safe frame
A space next to me
Where once my world did slumber
Now emptied with cold menace
Noises struck me cold
Laughter and crying as one
The piercing ash scream
Unmistakably below
I stumbled for my rifle
I find my wife there
Giving birth to a shadow
Such terror I felt
As the shadow came forward
Teeth and bone and gristle bore
My sweat stained hand shook
As I did raise the cold gun
Aimed for heart and home
The shots passing through the beast
Striking my wife in the chest
Lying by her side
Death in the cold kitchen
Blood pours from within
No shadow left to menace
Just a snuffed candle devoid.
raypool
Sun 22nd Nov 2015 17:16
cripes! That's damned clever and guides the mind well. I might try that myself - if so I will indicate that as an intention. Never too old to learn.
Ray