Seasoned
Softened black ground under foot
Smell of hot tar and spring
Has come; buttermilk white
The blackthorn sprays
On the lips of iron-age ditches.
Primroses speckle their green banks
New scarring earth’s old wounds.
Lanes exhale tang of burning old -wood;
Through this perfume ,rare as sandalwood ,
I wend the road that leads
beyond these hills
Towards the sun of other days ,
when you were summer.
Now ,unfrozen by your season ,
I awaken to the ache
Of desire .Not salted by reason,
nor yet bone-dried by the drought
of touch ,I seek you raw as I was
When side-by-side first we stood ,
Ready to bleed for our heyday’s
Golden deceptions.
Together we challenged the scythe ,
Defiant of times’ separation.,
Together we fell,
Shall we, together ,
grow again ?.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Thu 16th Jul 2009 15:43
Beautiful imaginative ideas pouring out of your mind in lovely phrases. I think they now need more discipline in presentation. But the originality sings out.