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Seasoned

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Softened black ground under foot

Smell of hot tar and spring

Has come; buttermilk white

The blackthorn sprays

On the lips of iron-age ditches.

Primroses speckle their green banks

New scarring earth’s old wounds.

Lanes exhale tang of burning old -wood;

Through this  perfume ,rare as sandalwood ,

I   wend the road  that leads 

beyond these hills

Towards the sun of other days ,

when you were summer.

Now  ,unfrozen by your season ,

 I awaken to the ache

Of desire .Not salted by reason,

nor yet bone-dried by the drought

of touch ,I seek you raw as I was

When side-by-side first we stood ,

Ready to bleed for our  heyday’s

Golden deceptions.

 

Together we challenged the scythe ,

Defiant of times’  separation.,

Together we fell,

Shall we, together ,

grow again ?.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 16th Jul 2009 15:43

Beautiful imaginative ideas pouring out of your mind in lovely phrases. I think they now need more discipline in presentation. But the originality sings out.

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Cate Greenlees

Thu 16th Jul 2009 15:18

Beautiful descriptive lines here.
Cate xx

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John Darwin

Wed 24th Jun 2009 12:43

Steve, thanks for your comment on 'she left her coat behind' - I agree with Nabila, fantastic feel to this. love it.
John

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Wed 24th Jun 2009 12:21

this is wonderful Stephen ...hae you thought of sending it off for publishing ?

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