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WAR AND PEACE

Idealism is always fine

But needs reality to define

The difference, so those like me and you

Make no mistake between the two.

It's easier by far to barely stir

And write of how we wished things were.

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◄ DEREK HATTON

OPERATION OVERLOAD (or D<FOR DEMISE>-DAY!) ►

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th Dec 2015 15:50

Placing yourself upon a cliff
Should give you cause to wonder if
Sense has gone beyond recall -
Proving pride propels a fall!
:-)

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 6th Dec 2015 11:47

a man stands on the edge of a cliff
"I know what I shouldn't do
but I'm not sure what I should do"
QED

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Isabel Hope

Fri 4th Dec 2015 23:46

Love this! it has a decided yet still questionable tone that rings true

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John Coopey

Fri 4th Dec 2015 23:13

It does seem to me that everyone who is certain of what we shouldn't do is clueless as to what we should do.

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