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AFTER MASS

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AFTER MASS

 

After Mass                                                                                                    

you would walk us

to the newsagent

in your Sunday best

with waistcoat,

watch chain

and monogrammed

umbrella.

 

As you chatted

over the papers

Sunday Times

with News of the World

hidden inside

we each chose a gift.

 

I remember the tap

of umbrella on pavement

returning home for lunch

how you raised your hat

to greet each passer by

the twinkle in your eye

 

The gentle wheeze

of your breath

as we danced beside you

a flush of contentment

spreading rapidly

across your cheeks.

 

From the collection 'Hiding in Shadows' by David Subacchi, Cestrian Press 2014. 'After Mass' first published by Poetry Scotland Open Mouse 3 December 2012. (c) David Subacchi.

David Subacchi.Welsh PoetryLiverpool poetryLiverpool Poets

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David Subacchi

Sat 19th Dec 2015 23:02

Thanks Mike.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 19th Dec 2015 18:22

Words used to decorate the memory in the best way.

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David Subacchi

Fri 18th Dec 2015 13:07

I was never involved in singing anything like that Harry but the rest of it was standard behavior for some men when I was a kid!

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David Subacchi

Fri 18th Dec 2015 13:05

Thank you Laura. Interesting what sticks in the mind. It was so long ago.

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Laura Taylor

Fri 18th Dec 2015 09:55

Lovely David - 'the gentle wheeze of your breath' - tiny details that the poet-in-waiting absorbed :)

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 17th Dec 2015 23:22

David,
my best memory is before Mass...striding along with some of my kids singing `We are the God squad`to the tune of `we are the champions`.

Another one is watching the men stumbling out of St Anthonys in Scotland road, lighting up desperately, and staggering across Scotty into the pub for a pint.

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David Subacchi

Thu 17th Dec 2015 10:45

You can find more of my poetry on line including some videos by simply searching on DAVID SUBACCHI.

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