Death

Like a scar

With stitches,

Comes death

With hinges.

Grief attached.

 

A road that winds

With unruly, leafless

Ditches.

Life detached.

 

Like a signpost

Comes fingers in

Acceptance bent.

Life half re-attached.

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Comments

Patrick Rushe

Fri 8th Jan 2016 15:52

Thank you Ray...my intention was to try to make desolate and bleak as death is...thank you...

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raypool

Fri 8th Jan 2016 12:09

A nice desolate feel, and in short disconsolate lines. This has hit a spot for me. It has a bleakness that feels right.

Ray

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