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Television Moon (after the Moon Landing, July, 1969)

 

Television Moon


                       ‘With how sad steps, O Moon …’

Oh, author of such a line,

Do you watch me these hundreds of years hence

With kind eyes?

Where are the ages between the ancients and me?

Spirits are pacing the night.

And do they walk, too, on the moon,

Like jesters,

Ballooning across its scarred face

In seven league boots

Mumbling folksy information

Through inverted fishbowls?

 

And you, O Moon … thou lyrical sorceress …

You cratered mass reflecting a dying sun!

How do I reconcile my heart and my head?

I, the Relentless Romantic,

Do vainly pursue

The musty culture of your fair legend

With muddy mind and scaled eyes,

Mirrors no longer of your sheer beauty.

Hearken! Silver Rock!

Help me to draw a magic circle

Wherein I may stride my giant step

From goddesses to stars.

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas np



 

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Dave Bradley

Sat 18th Jul 2009 12:20

I liked this. The seven league boots were a reminder that fairy tales were the science fiction of their day. We have seen and are living science fiction becoming reality, but there is still a fairytale-like quality about it all

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Dave Morgan

Fri 17th Jul 2009 18:49

Nice one Cynthia, much cleverer than mine. Two of my favourite poems are "Emperor Moon" by Gary Snyder and "When I heard the learned astronomer" by Walt Whitman. Both on similar themes. We're in good company.

Steve Smith

Mon 13th Jul 2009 10:38

several phrases of this poem will forever be associated in my mind with the moonwalking enterprise.I love the sentiment.Thanks for that.
Well done! Steve Smith

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Steve Regan

Thu 2nd Jul 2009 22:38

That's lovely, Cynthia.

'I, the Relentless Romantic,
Do vainly pursue
The musty culture of your fair legend
With muddy mind and scaled eyes,
Mirrors no longer of your sheer beauty.'

I remember that night (British time) when man landed and walked on the moon in 1969. I remember my late dad coming in to my bedroom full of wonder, to tell me about it.

Since then, where has all the romance gone?

"Don't let's ask for the moon. We have the stars." How poignant now seem the words spoken by Bette Davis's character in the film Now Voyager.

We can't even see the stars these days, and so many people have stopped even wondering about them. Sad, sad, sad.

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