only fond
I mustn't fall in love with you
but I can fall in fond
or maybe fall in very fond
but must not fall
I may not fall
I really can not fall
I should not fall
head over heels
head in the clouds
off my head
in love with you
Comments
Dave, you may be new to the site but your stamp is made. The quality is unerringly maintained. Is this a new piece, or one well thought over for some time?
<Deleted User> (5646)
Sun 5th Jul 2009 22:58
Hi Dave and thanks for the email. I do understand the difficulty and wish you luck.
I have been to the Bards once and went to the slam at Tallulahs recently. Also Wirral words.
Not sure when i'll go again though. Wigan is home for me. :-)
Thanks for your comment on my poem too and you're right, there is so much around us in every day life to write about. I like to make inanimate objects come to life, though i don't always fully succeed.
Janet.
i love the poem , and from my point of view it shows the futility of even trying to
'only do fond' :)
<Deleted User> (5646)
Sun 5th Jul 2009 11:27
If only you could....
I get a kind of wistful feeling with this one Dave.
As if you'd like to but daren't. Stay safe. :-)
Nice poem.
Janet.x
I like this poem Dave,fondness is good it never breaks a heart.
Hi Dave, great stuff, I've been very fond of a few! cheers Jeff
Hi Dave,
Enjoyed this - clever and so very true. Even - or maybe especially - the male of the species has precious little self-control when it comes to affectations of the heart. (Well maybe it's just me being a softie!)
Regards,
A.E.
That's a treat to read, Dave, Sweet but tinged with sadness ... or something.
I would second Francine with that. Such a lovely poignant poem and good that it comes from a man.
I really like this...
and I agree!
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Chris Dawson
Mon 20th Jul 2009 09:42
Lovely poem , very clever.
Cx