Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

MUSICIANS ON THE MOVE

The sound of the coach a lament

to time lately spent

on the motorway's

north - south spine .

 

We the listless musicians,

nocturnally drained bound for home

on the immeasurable strip.

      Light began to bleed through windows.

 

 

Yorkshire's dancers slumbered on

while into the estuaries of waiting homes

we ebbed and flowed

simply observing

the musician's code.  

◄ IN THE PIZZA EXPRESS TRINITY ROAD WANDSWORTH

COTSWOLD STONE VILLAGES ►

Comments

Profile image

Jim Trott

Sun 7th Feb 2016 09:15

The come-down after the adrenalin rush.

I've often thought how awful it must be when a musician moves from playing for fun, to it becoming a job. Not sure I could ever have handled that, personally.

Nicely written. Thought-provoking.

Profile image

raypool

Sat 6th Feb 2016 23:13

Greatly appreciate your sharing this, Greg and Stu.
I have numerous tales to recall - I could muster up some more musical bile in that direction, I'm sure!
I remember a line from Bill Withers' a Lovely Day "bears heavy on my mind." The problem with the bigger bands is the lack of personal expression - just being a jigsaw piece when the picture was all too familiar.
ps mortgages have to be paid.

Profile image

Stu Buck

Sat 6th Feb 2016 11:25

lovely ray. you paint a picture of someone who fell in love with music but then realised the worst place to love music was in a band. gentle recollections but tinged with sadness i feel.

Profile image

Greg Freeman

Sat 6th Feb 2016 10:16

Your tales of life on the road, Ray ... I see the beginnings of a collection here

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message