Sherbet Lemons
Sweetness fills my senses
As my tongue rolls around you
Savouring your taste
Transforming
As my mouth gently engulfs your contours
Sucking
Relishing every second until
Finally releasing your zesty finish
Comments
Haha!! Thanks Ray I'm glad you enjoyed it! Xx
blimey, I just turned the thermostat down after reading this. It makes my eyes water (so does the poem).
Most enjoyable Vicki.
Hehe! Yes the innuendo is intended - and I thought about titling it something like 'guilty pleasure' & putting a line in at the end about sherbet lemons .... But then decided it was more ironic to titillate the reader as they were imagining something else but knowing it was actually about sweets!! Maybe I'll rework it! And as to writing porn ..... I'll add that to my list of things to do! Thanks for your comment Wolfie xx
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Martin Elder
Fri 19th Feb 2016 12:31
Blimey you couldn't do that with real lemons. Nice poem Vicki