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Haiku: Having cats in Spring

daughter now in tears
wife sweeping up cottontails
rabbits depleted

🌷(3)

◄ gone

still life ►

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Martin Elder

Fri 8th Apr 2016 22:56

so well put Stu. Nice one

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steve pottinger

Thu 7th Apr 2016 17:04

Excellent!

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Patricio LG

Thu 7th Apr 2016 17:03

Sorry if I took this wrong stu but I could not help myself from laughing hysterically, excellent

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Stu Buck

Thu 7th Apr 2016 12:47

cheers both. i havent written a haiku in ages. rob, you are inspiring people to write this fine old form again it seems!

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Laura Taylor

Thu 7th Apr 2016 12:29

Fab. I do love a well written haiku. I used to use them to break me out of certain rhythmic patterns that I fall into without noticing.

Hmm. Not done one for ages. Might give it a go!

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Robert Mann

Thu 7th Apr 2016 11:58

Stu - love it mate and thanks for making it available for public consumption.
Rob

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