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from creation to cremation

sings the songbird to the moon

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raypool

Sat 9th Apr 2016 19:37

What I like here is the symbolism of the moon with the feminine principle, as adopted by certain religions. I agree with Wolfie on the last line. Inspired writing and riveting.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Sat 9th Apr 2016 16:56

thanks david. i was thinking about calling this 'mary' if that helps.

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