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BOGHOLE

I fear to look down

through the boghole

into the engine room

and to see

instead of hot activity

an excavated spoil heap

 

      hollowed out

by repetition where the sun

cannot reach.

 

The deeper it goes the darker

and the well of inspiration

like a dried up beach

 

where only scavengers will go

with their tiny patter of effort

repulsive and rejected

turning over only the expected.

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Stu Buck

Sun 17th Apr 2016 21:19

ive read this three times now and each time i can see something different. i can totally see cancer, i can totally see writers block and im imagining some train ride to hell. i think this is a triumph. and now all i can think is how wonderful the word boghole is for the rectum.

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raypool

Sun 17th Apr 2016 21:16

Why can't I write something frivolous and trivial and everyday or pseudo impressive or blatantly expressive
and funnel all those lovely gratifying satisfying ego boosting tickety boo comments into my insatiable inbox?

Thanks Wolfie , you're the one, but then you know that.

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raypool

Sun 17th Apr 2016 18:49

Blimey Wolfie - that is scary but luckily my intention was more mundane - an internalisation of lack of inspiration in creative efforts, so yes writer's block. All dredged out and the mood blackening sort of thing ! So you were right . Got a bit carried away, and your interpretation would have been spot on if that had been my plan! So go with the writer's block . Boghole was a rather dark title.

Ray

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