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holiday in cambodia

roots like gnarled vomit

spew forth from the gore soaked earth

soiled glasses ground underfoot

the girls here are young

but i am careful

i see you coming from afar

hold your tiny body in my fingers

and crush you like an ant.

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◄ cruel sea

bonsai ►

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Lynn Hamilton

Mon 18th Apr 2016 19:29

Joyti, You're forgiven. If there's a free t shirt and a sticker involved.... I'm in that gang! I'll bring the cheese grater.

Lynn x

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Stu Buck

Mon 18th Apr 2016 10:53

cheers guys. i had a workmate who went to cambodia a few years back and encountered some pretty dark stuff there. men living in hotels (for fuck all money), hiring young girls every night (again, for no money) and drinking the place dry. its a big culture over there, or it was. tragic really.

joyti - you are bang on! he's the worst one.

Joyti

Mon 18th Apr 2016 10:38

Lynn, is he asking "whose gang you want to be in" please forgive me I couldn't resist. If I met him I would skin him alive with a potato peeler.

Lynn Hamilton

Mon 18th Apr 2016 10:13

I have visions of a British holidaymaker, filled to the brim with alcohol, stains on his shirt and leering.

Thanks Stu! ;)

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Stu Buck

Sun 17th Apr 2016 21:53

thanks ray. the song just appeared on shuffle and this is what came out!

the deerhunter, what a fine film.

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raypool

Sun 17th Apr 2016 21:33

Exceptional, Stu. A crushing of innocence or at least its conversion into something sullied like the history therein. I was thinking of The Deer Hunter.

Ray

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