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Bloody Foreigners! (MuzzleHim)

I want to shave my head

Right down to the bone,

I want to see your bones buried

Deep

Under the black soil,

From whence you came.

 

You came over here and took our jobs

Now you stay over there,

And take our jobs!

 

You Islamic dog, you muslim!

You want muzzlin’, you muslim!

You must slim back your ways

Back in your ways

You are.

 

You work hard?

You think mindless hate is easy?

You think prejudice just comes

And it's easy-peasy?

 

I’m white and proud!

I know I can get a tan

But there is a ban on gettin' a tan

In my house

In my country

That’s now a cunt tree.


Who shall I hate next?

◄ I Don't Know

Humbert Humbert, Pleased To Meet You. (Forbidden Love) ►

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clarissa mckone

Wed 22nd Jul 2009 03:36

Welcome Thomas,


I think your poem is very interesting
and shows that some people

are in a since pig headed.
I think its good that all people can speak and
write whats on their minds.
No one should ever tell another
that their comment is
of no value. In fact to call another names
is to a point a real problem.

I enjoy being called an infidel
and being looked at like I'm scum
in my own land, where I was born.

I find it fascinating, that so many can lose a job
to a lower paid worker, from another country.
I all so find it very interesting when, so many
flee the country of birth, and then go into

another and try to keep the very things they

left behind.Its no secret, that if you change
the ethnic makeup, and religious makeup
of a country enough, that, that very country ceases

to exist.Just look to history to try and disprove this statement.
When my family came over on the boats
and paid their way in, and had to pass health inspections

to be admitted, this country was young.We all had some hard lumps

along the way, to prove ourselves worthy of being Americans.

In other words, we had to work, pay taxes, and blend in and speak the language that

bonds a culture.Many that travel to other country's, don't do this, and in my opinion
have no respect for the country that they take from.Just my observation.
Your poem, for me was funny in many ways, and sad in others. I hope you know that

not all people think like that. But some points from the skin head are valid, just as yours are.Your poem is not offensive, nor is it racist.I would not worry about it.Freedom of speech, is of great value.Some people are ultra sensitive, and worry for others, that need to just get a life.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Jul 2009 10:45

Thomas, Isobel was right to say 'Welcome' first. I should have done that myself as the first person to comment. I honestly didn't want anything bad to happen to you in the wake of the hot feelings we've currently experienced on this website. You can update (if you wish) on the Discussion button under General/Racist Poetry. It's a long thread but it will explain our note of caution to you. And I did like your poem! Very original, but not obvious without the photo.

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Isobel

Tue 21st Jul 2009 09:50

Hello Thomas - welcome to WOL - we are a friendly bunch when you get to know us and I can assure you totally unracist. Your explosive poem hits us at a time when we are all a bit sensitive to the whole issue - having been accused (with no justification) of being racist. Even the most innocuous poem can be misread it seems so that is why people are urging you to be cautious. That doesn't mean to say that you don't have the right to explore the theme of racism though - it is just the timing that is unfortunate - we are all feeling got at. Look forward to reading more of your stuff - I found the one about loneliness very sad.
Isobel x

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winston plowes

Mon 20th Jul 2009 22:36

As a poet on this blog your identity, moral standpoint and colour are unknown. Even your little picture is no guarentee. I do not wish to stifle poetic expression and this subject can be a great one for strong poetry. Cynthia is right on this I feel. e.g. My name is Winston yet I am white! Hey... what you can do is to give an introduction to the poem (maybe in italics) at the start. This could set the tone and may give you an oportunity to say where you are coming from. Winston

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 20th Jul 2009 20:37

Thomas, please be careful. Your humour may backfire badly because lines get taken out of context. Is that really what you want to share?

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