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Humbert Humbert, Pleased To Meet You. (Forbidden Love)

Liquorice all-sorts are the best.

So many colours and so many choices,

What’s not to like?

Anyone would love a bit of that.

I’m the sweet shop’s best customer,

The ‘keeper wonders where I put it all...

I smile.

 

I’m generous and kind.

Be kind and considerate

And treat them with respect,

That’s they key.

I

Am a gentleman.

 

A romantic walk in the park

Hand in hand

I met her at the swings

She needed a push,

So I gave her what she wanted

I don’t see the problem.

 

She was happy

I was happy.

She wanted to play games and giggle

I felt loved

And smiled.

I ask, what’s wrong with that?

 

It’s so nice to meet someone new.

When you have to move around

It’s hard to find that someone special

It’s hard to find the one

The one you can love.

 

She looked at me,

I knew she could see

She could see me.

Her mother was so upset

When she found us

In the bushes.

 

I don’t see the problem,

It’s young love

And

She knew what she was doing.

 

She must have.

 

◄ Bloody Foreigners! (MuzzleHim)

To Love or Not to Love? ►

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clarissa mckone

Wed 22nd Jul 2009 03:43

wow, I would have never thought about that subject matter, for a poem. You have done very well.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 21st Jul 2009 19:40

So - not a thinker, eh? You're good, Thomas Topping, you're very good. Don't misplace a single line of anything you write. Make a filing space anywhere, under your pillow if necessary, but keep track of your work. You're up and running now.

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Isobel

Tue 21st Jul 2009 12:59

You are certainly fearless in the subject matters you tackle! A hard one to read when you have young children but you do manage successfully to take us into the mind of a paedophile. Back to the housework...

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