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A VALE OF TEARS

with their paisley ties

and come to bed eyes

and me at seventeen

 

and the west end world

the bond street world

they made me realize

 

there was more to life

than a man and a wife

and the usual legitimate stirrings

 

a shady scene of primp and preen

and unnatural occurrings.

 

Now with the passing of so many years

no one refers to men as queers

 

society bears its seeded fruit

not wild flowers in a vale of tears.

◄ A FIGHT FOR LIFE OR DEATH (the spider and the wasp)

PARK BENCH ►

Comments

Thomas Johnson

Sat 30th Apr 2016 21:13

This had really pleasant pacing and a poignant point placed perfectly at the end. Bravo

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raypool

Tue 26th Apr 2016 11:28

I entirely agree with the thrust of your points, Mark. My experience being centred in the early sixties was a melting pot of change, and chiefly there was a sense of isolation and fear for the gay of the day, and knowing that the law was against them they became intensely defensive for their cause. It was rather pathetic in the main. Age gives us a long view. Attitudes today have swung back . It's still a major crime in many countries of course.....

Thanks for the comments.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 25th Apr 2016 14:30

An interesting "take" on changing attitudes over the years.
It has been said that anything that can be accomplished
under the sun cannot be defined as "unnatural". There
are other more appropriate words that originate within human society. Take your pick from the following:
abnormal, inappropriate, unacceptable, to mention a few,
depending on your own levels of tolerance and acceptance
that are themselves frequently the product of conditioning
and various influences like religion.
The best place to start may be "there's a time and place
for most things".

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