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diner

if you walk past the diner just after seven o’clock

once dusk has bruised the pink peach flesh of the day

and the taxi lights scream yellow murders outside the window

you can see the waitress, now a cleaner, in her lime green

smock, whirling and pirouetting through the air with

her mop, a noble gas, a neon sign, dancing, slipping and

scything through the empty spaces, fly free sweet jane doe

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◄ arborio

i am hopeless and you are hopeless and together we have hope ►

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Jon

Wed 4th May 2016 23:57

beautifully descriptive...quite touching as well...once dusk has bruised the pink peach flesh of the day... love it!

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raypool

Tue 3rd May 2016 21:03

a lovely vignette , a moment sweeping in on a nostalgic sunset. I can't help thinking of the Edward Hopper corner diner with the lights on.

Ray

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