that night we both dreamt of resurrection
i roll your emotions like a rubber ball between my glowing palms
and take your minds yolk in my veins
you whispered its so brittle, this life
you were uncontrollably sad trembling
because we will never be able to occupy
the exact same physical space.
i stand before a crowd and read poetry
but i cannot pronounce the word love
Lynn Hamilton
Sat 7th May 2016 05:33
Very nice, Stu. I totally agree with Martin about the lines. Fellas, if you love someone just tell them.
Lynn x
Stu I love these lines especially
'I roll your emotions like a rubber ball between my glowing palms and take your minds yolk in my veins'
beautiful and as Ray says that word Love can be so difficult to say in public.
It's funny how public pronouncements of "love" always seem like a sort of cop out of deeper things, which is a shame, and it has the same universal appeal as say the sky but has to be proven and probed to bring a dimension to it. That's my view anyway and what do I know? I think the last two lines are sort of down to earth after the delicacy of the other ones. It works well. Ray
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Stu Buck
Sat 7th May 2016 09:31
cheers all. much appreciated as always!