Splendid Is The Flower
Splendid Is The Flower
if I make something beautiful
will you gently touch it
with your perspective
or will you taint it
with a vengeful critics tongue
am I qualified
to judge you
either way
if I make something beautiful
will you take the time
to kiss it with your praise
or will you rip it to shreds
with your own experience
are you qualified
to judge me
either way
the blinking cursor
hesitates on the next line
and wonders if it’s worth
going on
what follows
is born of doubt
if I make something beautiful
is it for you or me
is it my penance
or your crusade
do the words deserve to live
or should I stifle them
for fear of ridicule
revilement or rejection
so many questions
I admit
I don’t know
but
fellow weaver of words
I weep for the fact
that neither do you
raypool
Sat 7th May 2016 20:25
Maybe we all suffer frustration starting with school when our young minds felt nowhere to dwell in the adult sphere, and that curse is carried on into adult life - which again is full of curses and pettiness . I understand fully the sentiment , it is wonderfully clear.
Ray