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INDUSTRIAL WASTELAND

Cresting the rise I came upon brickworks

gashes of red powdered spent force

cascades of guts pushed back

to a stubbled hill

beyond that a dip, a bowl

grey, mottled probably for water

diversion and catchment

scoured piebald with weeds

where once water had poured in

reflections of sky now blinded.

 

I stood on the lipless rim

marvelled at the quiet desolation

pinned down by the wind booming

like the voices of Gods abandoned.

 

Youth in its restless quest for diversion

had brought skateboards

for careening daring the concrete

and the BMX too had come

with the challenge of ancient Rome

 

in the amphitheatre, skulls at risk of cracking

and a stunted tree had trapped itself

like a crooked sword plunged up

out of the elephant skin

lancing the fretting air.

I watched as the fruits of dead potential

ignored the sweeping wind.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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raypool

Sat 11th Jun 2016 20:23

Cheers Rob, appreciate it.

Thanks Stu. Great places these derelict areas for the odd poem ! Glad you liked it.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Sat 11th Jun 2016 12:51

thats gorgeous ray

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Stu Buck

Sat 11th Jun 2016 12:51

Cresting the rise I came upon brickworks

gashes of red powdered spent force

cascades of guts pushed back

to a stubbled hill

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Robert Mann

Sat 11th Jun 2016 11:21

Ray - there's a lot to like here. I think my favourite line is 'Cascades of guts pushed back to a stubbled hill'. Derelict buildings/works are fascinating places.
Rob

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