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THE HAUNTING

The afternoon took its time

as the yews and the planes drew back

to guard the velvet borders

and guide a rivulet of dimming light

to tame the creeping life that dwelt therein

before the advent of spreading night.

 

Through that door as oft before

my silent presence went alone

and by the lantern's prickling gaze

adjusted to the whispering hall

and now the sylvan windows threw

a tapestry of patterns on the staircase wall

 

and, as silent as a human I climb

no breath upon my aspen frame

to where the master sleeps alone

for well I might in vengeance tread

and vapour drawn to the pressing chamber

fill the master full of dread

 

and, in my haunting watch his restless soul

tormented by his dreadful deed

in bringing me to this place to die

by violent thrusts of his filthy sword

and send me thus to that darker place

where yet I seek the love of the Lord.

 

No peace lies there to give me rest

and in this fretful house I dwell

most times, as though my life is here

to revel in the master's schemes

and by earthly skills made cosmic keen

enjoy his black and festering dreams.

 

My simple hope is born on wings

that soon his wretched body fails

and in the anguish of his death

I'll watch and wait for the final twist

and, having no pressing time to fill

rejoice in anguish and the final breath.

 

 

 

 

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supernatural vengeance

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raypool

Mon 27th Jun 2016 14:55

Thanks LCPTB for your approbation and liking the text, I wanted to set it up with the first verse to get as you say the atmosphere.

Ray

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raypool

Sun 26th Jun 2016 17:22

Bless your cotton socks Stu. I know you're drawn to the macabre ; I started with the scene and had no idea where it was going, honest guv. I had the idea of the six lines and the rhyming more as an experiment really.

That's twice you mentioned POTW now - but subtlety doesn't do it does it, let's be honest. Back to the drawing board !
Thanks again. Ray

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Stu Buck

Sun 26th Jun 2016 16:34

ooh ray this is great. have you been reading poe? has a great, gothic feel to it, is packed full of great lines (the lanterns prickling gaze) but for me this...

and guide a rivulet of dimming light

to tame the creeping life that dwelt therein

before the advent of spreading night.

...is the finest bit.

yum yum, much to reread and enjoy before it inevitably becomes POTW!

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