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Twisted

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when you walk down an underpass
with a beautiful woman still a teenager:
stand away from her,


rest your shoulders against the tiles,
set a finger into the grout
and smile.
Twist your nail until it breaks.
StillĀ smile.
And if you still want
her like I did
thenĀ  break another
nail
and when all
trace of nails and smiles
have withered
withered
from those tiles


kiss her
kiss her
once more


kiss her
yet once more for me.

◄ Icelandic poem 1 In the voice of Bjork

I Have That Tape Still ►

Comments

darren thomas

Sat 8th Aug 2009 11:30

Dark. Sinister. Disturbing.

Love it.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 8th Aug 2009 10:50

Strong stuff, Mr. Carroll, hard-hitting and exciting. You sure are good.

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Anthony Emmerson

Sat 8th Aug 2009 00:34

Out of your two postings I think I prefer the enigmatic qualities of this one. That last line feels just as painful as having your nails removed - with pliers. Ouch.
Regards,
A.E.

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