THE GIRL WHO DID JIGSAW PUZZLES
At Clanricarde Gardens on a stuffy summer's night
I dropped a waitress at her flat
on a considered whim though undermotivated,
and she asked me in.
Through the marooned shell of a hall
and up the stair, no carpet
to soften the tread or tame
the lighted glare.
It was never designed to be a conquest,
she was dumpy and plain
and all the music wrung out of me
it was nearing the hour of three.
The Bayswater Road minded its business
she brewed a coffee
I perched, she plumped.
Then she drew my tired eye
to the magnolia walls
to the jigsaw puzzles carefully mounted
in matching frames, spreading out
to personalize the nondescript room,
thousand piecers, a minor lifetime
spent in modest absorbing gloom
and suddenly I fancied her for her brain engaged
bent forward over the utility table
pressing mole - like to the task
all thoughts of waitressing abandoned there
and how gratified she might feel
to have an admirer seeing her
being constantly undersold
to really shine or simply think
to put her hand in mine.
raypool
Tue 5th Jul 2016 21:49
I'm coming straight back on this Phil. So glad you got the truth of the feel of this one. This was not fantasy but sad reality - something that can move us and perhaps add a little moment of quality. I tend to write of actual events. The west end hotels I worked in during the eighties were masters of their own destiny and flagships for squandering of money for jollies including us musicians who got mortgages with the results, thank God. This lady was a victim of the system - a job of sorts. Clanricarde Gardens was stacked with tiny apartments for catering staff. There was a disastrous fire there apparently probably due to lack of electrical maintenance.
Cheers, I feel humbled that you liked this.