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MADE TO MEASURE, MADE FOR PLEASURE

The sublime fit she made of her mouth

was a classic of design

all moods contained within

that moistening cavern

whose inner movements

spiralled into spasms

like the coils of a rope tightening

 

and rainbow dreams flashed

pulsated as tresses, caresses

flowed along the engorging

nape of her neck

into a final death of release

 

and her eyes like beacons

searching for pinpoints

of ecstasy in this, this

most favoured embrace

in spasms of discontinuous grace.

🌷(3)

◄ TRAPPED IN TIME

THE GIRL WHO DID JIGSAW PUZZLES ►

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raypool

Sun 3rd Jul 2016 14:17

Thanks Stu. I nearly had second thoughts with this, but why not - memory is a great thing. It reminds me of the old muso joke: what's the similarity between lobster thermidore and a blow job? You can't get either at home. You were right about the instrumentation by the way: the pink flute.

Phil: congratulations on POTW first off ! Wonderful and moving (and David's offering). Thanks for the appreciation. I put my all into this, in a manner of speaking. I offer my envy to all who may be thus engaged.

Ray

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Various

Sun 3rd Jul 2016 12:11

Amazing description... hopefully it was written in celebration?

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Stu Buck

Sat 2nd Jul 2016 23:25

bloody hell ray. spasms of discontinuous grace. thats brilliant!!!

all of this is fantastic. seedy and sweaty and dripping with filth.

(whats it actually about by the way? i assumed some sort of musical instrument but i could be wrong and you could just be a filthy old man)

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