model glue
these myriad criss-cross shaped
metal pieces and the hull in partial
form which lay still bond
together in my palm..
I think of how I might feel enough
to put them back together
so as not to insult their original semblance.
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What I like here elP is the idea of being in control and yet standing aside while a process takes place. A sort of hiatus of patience. have we not all been there at some time. A test for us .
Perhaps I am in the dark re Stu's comment, sorry there must be a connection to something I havn't spotted.
Ray
elPintor
Sat 23rd Jul 2016 13:44
glad you liked it, Stu..I removed the link because I felt that maybe it was too specific. I would rather I hadn't now..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EKbkArYyics
i first read this last night when there was a link to L.S on here. I thought it was very clever and well written and quite a poignant piece. Enjoyed it, a different take on a tragedy.
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elPintor
Mon 25th Jul 2016 00:37
Hi, Ray. Stu was very kind to pick up on that..I put up a link to a vid (see below) shortly after the blog post. The relationship between the post and the song is somewhat more personal than I wanted to get into, so I removed it. However, Stuart brought up a good point so I returned it.
Truthfully, I could go on and on. In fact, I've taken a page full of notes to explain. However, you've picked up on a good bit of it. Things happen and things change. Sometimes, you can't fix what's broken, and sometimes, it's insulting to have someone put their hands into personal situations to effect "repair", because they can only do it according to their own perspective.
Thanks to all for commenting. Truly, it can be eye-opening to revisit one's own ideas through the thoughts of others.
elP