at the lengths of the sea
embellished necklace
felt in the sand
under feet that step quickly
away from seaweed
bowing ankles
and hair snagged by tide
and the tumble
of how weak
a body becomes
when so far
from the towel
the calm beach life
of when you last
felt so sure
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Thu 13th Aug 2009 18:48
Your images, metaphors, choice of words are so vivid, so insightful! So connotative (smile).