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On Being Alone

The strange thing about being alone

Is how friends don’t know you’re alone

Or don’t realise

Or don’t care

 

The strange thing about being on your own

Is that you never lose an argument

When you argue with yourself.

 

Being alone,

All alone.

No comfort

No hugs

No support

No assurance

No-one to tell you what you’re doing is right

No-one to tell you what you’re doing is wrong.

 

Your poetry gets full of angst

There’s discordance in your song

Your art is dark and gloomy

There’s no love

Except the twisted bitter kind

No joy

Except the joy of misery

You’ve no wish to be brave or strong.

 

But hey,

At least your carbon footprint’s low.

◄ Watching The Clock

Silent & Cold ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Mon 17th Aug 2009 11:14

Very observational. I would disagree with the line about never losing an argument with yourself though. Done that loads of times.

Janet.x

Yolande

Sun 16th Aug 2009 21:41

Very heartfelt . I would imagine this resonates with most people at sometime. I have observed that one can even feel alone in a crowded room. A very thought provoking poem Steven.

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Isobel

Sun 16th Aug 2009 20:39

Oh Steven - don't know if this is written from a personal perspective or not but it is ever so sad. I guess we all get those moments when we feel like this though - no matter how many people surround us. You express the feelings vey well and I find that last line particularly poignant and hard hitting.

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