O RIVER THAMES
O River Thames, maiden born pure
then, like the life around you polluted
now once more sparkling without your trade
chastened by those who would buy
your favours in high rise form
pressed close guarded, jealous of others
who would press their claims
on your genuflection and breathe
your grey reflection.
You shamelessly ignore those men
with Rolex watches who,
waking through glass
pivot on east and west water
make their insignificant histories count
on the only waterway they cannot mount.
raypool
Sat 20th Aug 2016 21:16
Thanks so much for appreciating this one Stu. I started with a different version and whittled it down, which is what I often do now. (Like the teacher said, "can do better"!)
I had the idea of personalizing the water, an old trick to focus the emotions.
Ray