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fallout

look straight at the sun when it is snowing.

see each flake flecked and fanged with fire.

at last this is not mere frozen rain, but skin,

human skin falling, in strips and patches, air

cloying with the stench of rubber and carbon.

 

iodine stains the fingers brown as hair sheds

from scalps thick grit with dust and detritus

 

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◄ after we realised we were nothing we became everything

the rabbit ►

Comments

elPintor

Wed 24th Aug 2016 12:14

Chilling..

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raypool

Tue 23rd Aug 2016 21:32

I like that line "each flake flecked and fanged with fire."
It really carries weight, and forces us to look up with a cessation of hope . Excellent Stu.

Ray

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