'STUFF'
I put this poem on the poetry review site, first one I had written in years and haven't fine tuned it because if I do, I feel that it will take away the specific moment of the poem. I just wrote it - tell a lie I did fine tune a couple of tiny little bits, mainly that involved the dreaded ' apostrophe'. If you looked at the poetry review, thanks for all your great comments on it and thank you all for making me so welcome.
It's all just stuff!
Too much of life, is stuff!
Problems are caused by stuff!
But, what is it?
It's just stuff.
Kid's stuff! My stuff! Your stuff!
We shout about stuff.
Stuff that's in the way.
Stuff's here! Stuff's there!
It's just stuff.
Try and clear the stuff,
but it doesn't go away.
It just comes back some other day.
It's just stuff.
And it's here to stay.
Dave Bradley
Tue 25th Aug 2009 15:53
It's still good stuff Nicky! Glad you've posted it here. Keep em coming. Thanks for the comment - just what was needed - sympathy from a fellow sufferer