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Stereogram

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for Peter Robinson

 

I was listening to Dylan’s Time Out of Mind,

his late renewal after wasted years

– all simmer and wry despair –

to find that maybe he was rated again.

The voice was a wreck on a burnished track,

the songs a palimpsest of antique blues.

 

In the end the words will come

if they have to, like music that’s ghosted

by echoes stored in a phonograph’s horn

– remembering now stereogram.

Was that what we called it?

 

It was more like a sideboard

than a sound machine

with its glossy veneer and gilt trim.

Its clunking drop-down front

revealed a deck and storage,

a radio that warbled and seethed.

 

Picking up on Dylan,

I worked back to his debut album.

On the sleeve he was just a kid,

dressed like a vaudeville hobo,

yet seemed to dig deeper than most.

When he sang about death

he ripped through hokum.

We had all our lives before us.

 

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 17th Oct 2016 16:39

I bought that album with its famous cover of the singer and
girl friend arm in arm on a New York street when it came
out - a time when I, like the man himself, was in my 20s.
Some songs I liked and some were OK but it was just
another album from some guy who was making a name
in the folk/protest music world. No big deal for me when
so much else was happening musically and I didn't feel any
inclination to stay with his stuff, then or since...despite
his later association with a favourite singer/songwriter: Johnny Cash.
As for BD's big award: Truly - the times, they are a changing!

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raypool

Sun 16th Oct 2016 22:28

I like the way that Dylan - now in his seventies - is made to seem almost biblical in his wisdom; and I think this is quite correct and as it should be, David. The groundbreakers like him and Lennon are people we hang destiny on with all its revelations.
I enjoyed the whole tone of the poem, but I always do with your stuff.

Ray

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