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Wimpy bar days

Ice cream sundaes

Lemonade or coke

Blowing bubbles through a straw

Sucking out the dregs

Makes an interesting sound

Like coming up for air

On the menu hamburgers

And strange shaped sausages in a ring

Bacon rashers and chips

 

Outside kicking stones and cans

In streets of idle pleasure

Looking for who knows what

Who knows where?

Among the flashing lights and slot machines

Hands in pockets

A time of disinterested leisure

 

Along the front chased by the wind

Arms outstretched an aeroplane

Trying to glide

Pushed along by gusts a ship in full sail

Past the salt and vinegar smell of fish and chips

We come upon

Pork pie and kiss me quick hats

That blow frantically like demented banshees

Outside seafront shops

Together with lengths of bright coloured lights

Strung between lampposts

Sending out their frantic signal

In the half light of a fading day

Come, come over here

They yell

Want a goodtime

Bring your copper and your silver

Sample the tired and yawning rides

That turn and spin

To the Wurlitzer organ sound

Of a number of half baked jolly tunes

In my head round and round

All done to gloss over

The pale green peeling paint

On seafront lampposts and benches

The rusting charm of seaside shelters fading

Now the only place to escape the underpass

As quickly we are blown back to the car

 

Brighton 1970 something ?

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raypool

Sun 30th Oct 2016 16:57

Great stuff and entirely memorable as part of that period Martin. I spent lots of time in Brighton and Hove with a married lady who had split up; mum lived in Rottingdean in 1972. Did the film you mention have to do with Brighton Rock ? Nice and evocative and agree with all the other comments .

Ray

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Martin Elder

Thu 20th Oct 2016 20:01

Thank you all so much for reading and commenting i am pleased that it evoked such positive memories for you Trevor.
I know what you mean about having your taste buds getting stirred up Rose , you can't beat seaside fish and chips
Colin your response is a poem in it's own right, fab Thanks for the links. I have looked at the first one and it stirred up so many memories. thank goodness the lanes are still there. The seven stars I can remember going in to where there were go go dancers
and the journey round Brighton along the seafront featuring what I remember as the palace pier and the good old west pier before it was burnt to the skeleton it is now.
I also saw the marina under construction in the film. That must have been taken whilst I was working there. there were three contracts and I worked on the approach roads. lastly the other part that stood out for me was were the old Lyons corner house had been next to the regent cinema across from the clock tower that became virgin records, many an hour spent in there!
Cheers mate

Cynthia sorry to have missed you Tuesday but it is a difficult day for me now. Ian and I keep missing each other, I will try and catch him at Wigan soon! glad you liked the poem thanks for reading

Thanks again everybody including Andy and Tony , much appreciated by your encouragement

Martin

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 19th Oct 2016 17:28

Martin, missed you last night in Sale. Ian W' was excellent, as were all the regulars.

And so is this work. There is such a bold, swinging style to your poems these days, a freedom of lines that just picks up and carries the reader full tilt from start to finish, with panache. You fully deserve all the comments given.

And congrats on POTW.

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Andy N

Wed 19th Oct 2016 12:55

excellent martin. really enjoyed this. cooking on gas with this topic for me

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Tue 18th Oct 2016 20:51

great poem Martin - thanks for the free ride on the nostalgia slide - for taking me back to my Brighton days - skateboarding down the seafront ramps - avoiding the London skins when we were punks - and later - finding my way back to my Kemptown bedsit - holding on to the moonlit aquamarine railings - blind drunk against the sideways rain - the pain of the sun on a dead calm sea - hungover, next day, driving - delivering wines and spirits for Unwins offy - to the old ladies and sgt major drunks - the pubs the drugs the late night clubs - the tramps the queers the burned down pier - and all the touristy stuff we were too cool to notice - except maybe the amusement arcades - space invader pinball wizards - fish 'n' chips from the Chinese near the station - they always asked did we want them open or wrapped - on Monday I'm going back again - just for the day - but it won't be the same as all my yesterdays. Have you seen these btw:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gWsTb0FYknI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Qyl38XISe0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FTBcJh4GmN0

<Deleted User> (9882)

Tue 18th Oct 2016 15:33

Martin,beside lifting my spirits,this poem also made me very hungry! Whats for afters?


Loved it! yummy!



Rose.?

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 18th Oct 2016 11:49

Not just Brighton: brings back memories of my childhood in Belfast and Bangor (NI) holidays. Enjoyed it - thanks.

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