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JU JITSU

Once when but a callow youth

from the library forsooth

I borrowed a book on the art of ju jitsu

with crude and basic plans of action

of assailants and defenders'

over reaction..

 

With these moves inside my head

to school I went with wary tread

until a boy quite lumpy and large

set upon my fuselage

 

stampeding, bull- like as I cowered

sweating and snorting

descended upon me

and full of experiment

I dropped to my knee

 

helped him gracefully over my head

and turned to see his robust descent

with a whoof and a clatter

his bravado shattered.

 

Even to this very day

I think of ju jitsu's interplay.

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raypool

Sun 23rd Oct 2016 11:12

Thanks Suki for spotting the pseudo Shakespeare line .

Thanks Martin, those old memories ! Mind over matter I reckon.

Thanks Colin, sometimes the rhyming just pops into my head! Must be a first I suppose.

Thanks Tony. A pleasure.

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Sun 23rd Oct 2016 09:47

to add to Mr Spangles comment - large / fuselage is a great paring. Nice one Ray.

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Martin Elder

Sat 22nd Oct 2016 22:35

A lovely little story Ray. Actually knew of a young chap who was small and weedy therefore got bullied at school until one summer holiday he started weight lifting under by the time term restarted he had bulked out so much no one ever bullied him again.
A great poem Ray

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suki spangles

Sat 22nd Oct 2016 04:29

Love the rhyme youth/forsooth! Great little story nicely told. Thanks for sharing.

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