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THEY'RE DIGGING THE ROAD UP AGAIN

They're digging the road up       again

last time it was a water main

this time it's gas replacement

from minor road to minor basement

 

they're moleing through the grass and dew

the traffic mounts

temporary lights

temperatures rise

and particulates.

 

They're digging up the road        again

strange vehicles stand back to back

men in red are visible for miles

workers in an urban circus

the electric was done not long ago

traffic diverted for months on end

 

wildlife breathed sighs of relief

furrowing and burrowing underneath

temporary lights

more particulates.

 

We see the services oft updated

utilities dig into ample coffers

simultaneously advertising

the temptations of their latest offers.

Soon the signs will go up       again

with the weight of bigger tipper lorries

 

on their way to distant quarries

pressing down on pipes and cables

and down in those dumps is where we'll be

just like it's like on reality telly

while we endlessly complain

and temperatures climb like a rising main.

 

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raypool

Mon 31st Oct 2016 14:55

I think if you did a survey around the country Martin, there would be a lot of angst on this subject. Not forgetting the leaving out of redundant cones for other teams (in red, or yellow).

Colin: Could you be thinking of the Bernard Cribbens comedy song on the same subject ? Or it could just be On the Road Again -(who by I don't remember). TV is an option but I feel while telly is a ghastly word it just seems to ready easier being one syllable. Thanks anyway. I sympathise - we all suffer - I've usually got a sarcastic comment ready after fuming , but the old blood pressure you know! Yes, particulates is nasty and pseudo scientific, which makes it quite a useful word I suppose.

Thanks both. Ray

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Mon 31st Oct 2016 09:28

great stuff Ray - 'they're digging up the road again' reminds me of something but for the life of me I cannot think what and it might just bug me for the rest of the day!

would 'TV' work better than 'telly'?

I have my own roadworks madness playing out in my local town right now - the eastbound A40 dual-carriageway having been closed for six weeks to repair an underground mains gas pipe - traffic diverted down a country road - gridlock just about everywhere. I pass through and see simple solutions to ease the chaos and wonder why the dimwits in power don't think the same.

'particulates' is a good word - or a nasty word depending - one of those words you want to emphasise every syllable very slowly.

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Martin Elder

Sun 30th Oct 2016 14:53

I know the feeling Ray. All round where I live there are roadworks. Just wish they would finish one stretch before starting on another

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