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Who Pays the Ferryman?

A select gathering of bi-lingual souls enter

''The Galleon'' restaurant where

a group of local fishermen sit drinking raki.

 

Salt on lips from their fish 'n' chips

they gaze at the scene they came to view.

An artist's mural, a sea-scape, their escape.

 

A warm Aegean breeze blows, billowing sails

whistling through port-holes and beneath a canoe

leaning against its bows.

 

Further out to sea a collection

of cruisers and millionaires' yachts,

pedalos and dinghies jostle among speedboats

and liners form a queue.

 

Beneath a lone star and a crescent moon

the coachman pays the ferryman and

''The Galleon'' walls draped with grey damask. It's owner,

with pockets bulging and a belly filled with pride 

walks along a shingle beach waving at passers-by

riding the back of a banana ski.

Thank god for British t.v.   

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

◄ 3 poems by Chloe Ramsden (Janet's niece)

Kinsella (part iv) In the Cave. ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 2nd Sep 2009 12:03

Thanks Steve and i think you got the general idea there. :-)

Andy and Cynthia - yes there was a tv series called ''Who pays the ferryman.'' Not sure if it was ever a movie or a book but it was filmed on a small part of Crete which became largely popular because of the series. (it's now a very cheesy claim to fame) but the poem is supposed to reflect the beauty of the resort mixed with the financial gain for the islanders thanks to British tv.
For the life of me i cannot remember the name of the resort. It's probably around 15 years since i went there but it's a true account of how i remember it. I wrote it some time ago and did some editing recently to some old stuff so decided to test it out here.

Incidentally Steve's comment does make sense in that, does one want to be here where it has become so English, it's unrecognizable as a Greek resort.

Janet.x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 1st Sep 2009 18:28

Janet, every time I think I've put my finger on it, I get lost again. Help me out. It's an imaginative poem, and I'm just missing connections.

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Andy N

Tue 1st Sep 2009 13:56

i like this, Janet although I am not sure if you need the last line as it gives it a twist that is perhaps a bit too tellie for my liking... i like the feel off the piece a lot thou (Hasnt their being a film or book called that?)

steve mellor

Tue 1st Sep 2009 11:58

Hi Janet
I needed something to take me away, and this may be it.
Very pictorial. I could almost be there.
But do I want to be?
Steve M. :-)))

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