'London Victoria' by Travis Brow is Write Out Loud Poem of the Week
The new Write Out Loud Poem of the Week is ‘London Victoria’ by Travis Brow, a tale of unrequited love. The poem has been praised by Write Out Loud regulars like Harry O’Neill, for its “lovely rhymed clarity”, while Ray Pool described it as “winsome (some you lose)”. Travis’s profile page reveals that he has returned to Write Out Loud after a spell away, and that he still thinks poetry is “vital, and worthless, by turns”. Here are his replies in our Q&A interview:
What got you into writing poetry?
I was 16 and singing in a band. The band broke up but i needed an excuse to get back on stage so i went from writng half-arsed lyrics to half-arsed poems. Plus, my dad's been writing poems since he was a kid so I suppose i've inherited something ...
How long have you been writing?
I'm 49 now so all told, i've been at it for 30-odd years.
Do you go to any open-mic nights?
I used to do/attend a lot of open mics, and I briefly ran my own night in a bar in Manchester. Now, though, I tend not to perform. I know I ought to but I prefer the writing, and once ! get in from work, especially at this time of year, I'm reluctant to go back out again.
Your favourite poet/poem?
I like the American poet Richard Wilbur, and there are parts of Pope's Essay on Man which I think are superb. Paradise Lost is profound and, once you get your eye in, beautifully written.
You are cast away on a desert island. What's your luxury?
The island itself is the luxury; I'm somewhat anti-social so to have the island to myself would be bliss. That might lose me some friends ...
LONDON VICTORIA
by Travis Brow
One Herne Hill day one red hot June
my one and only proper swoon
divested me of that control
which hitherto construed my soul;
I fell in love; I had no choice.
At last my ardour found its voice.
I told her straight; she took it well,
and as she did, undid the spell.
But, love demands that I demur
and dwell upon my love for her
who wants me only as a friend;
so I'll just let myself pretend
that one day, maybe, she might wake
and recognise a telling ache.
I know she won’t. I know she rates
her instinct as one might the fates.
She trusts in what she feels so
I really ought to let it go.
I will, in time, but hope contends
that sometimes lovers start as friends.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Thu 17th Nov 2016 20:02
Hi Travis - glad you enjoyed our bit of fun in your absence and for settling the Victoria debate - but Herne Hill is a decent name too although a quick scan of Wikipedia doesn't seem to suggest any origins for the name - I have a silly fascination with names with Hill in them for obvious reasons and considered many when looking to name my children - my favourite was Truleigh Hill which is a hill above Shoreham-by-Sea in Sussex where I grew up - I think that's rather lovely. As it turned out both my boys ended up with fairly ordinary names but hey-ho. See you around. Col.