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JUST ANOTHER DAY

football grounds are deserted

libraries tightly shut

half light subsists

sadness stuck in a rut

but McDonalds comes to the rescue

it's just another day.

 

Clinics for the borderline insane

are holding open days again

swollen rivers are all in a rush

seeking a reasonable explanation for nature

domestic walls are checked for flecks of blood

its just another day.

 

The air hums with emergency calls

someone chokes, someone falls

the river has finally freed a trolley

a sunset hides its face in shame

its just another day.

 

Car lights are switched on early

a phone call comes in from Mumbai

with the threat of eastern promise

curtains draw over UPVC

standards are slipping the F word again

followed by gales of laughter

tearing through carehome screens

 to no avail

its ok with the BBC

and there is no other way.

 

Life goes on and it's not a rehearsal

Liz Fraser has auctioned her sweater

life is tough when you've had enough

a train from the twilight terminus

awaits another reversal

it's just another day.

 

Loss of bladder control coming on

but there is an advert for that

so all is not yet lost

on just another day.

 

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raypool

Wed 16th Nov 2016 11:09

David, I am tainting you with age I fear. In this netherworld I have often performed with scant results. But there is always the tea I suppose. Glad you like the tone. I have rightfully been accused of being nihilistic by others. The danger is it may always fail to please.

Colin , nicely spotted. Lucky to get a rhyme out of that line. I was aware of the song which I think was wonderful by the way. Dropping the It's didn't fool you !

Thanks friends.

<Deleted User> (13762)

Tue 15th Nov 2016 09:01

don't buy a ticket for the train departing from the twilight terminus Ray - well not just yet mate. A fine poem and that was my favourite line by far. I've only one other thing left to say:

do do do do do do
it's just another day...

C?L

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