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Up there in the swingers' district

where only the houses close their eyes

the mile of grass is an aired plain

every three lights one disappears

an interchange and a parting

a fox-fur collar fumbling at a door

open, shut, silence.

Late afternoon the cars glide

back from colour film and carpet ride.

Whistling twilight, the summer

is a newspaper frown.

You open the window and whisper zeros

the far-side wall, cement cracks

and you lean out in the colder air

as the wind dissolves your face.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 20th Nov 2016 13:01

Really good, challenging to read, and to consider the intent of such specific words. IMO, nothing here is a casual choice, but the meanings may differ according to reader experience - as always.

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raypool

Sat 19th Nov 2016 18:52

An intriguing through the keyhole account with just a hint of what may go on behind closed doors. It has that atmosphere of the clandestine camera revelation. It all seems a bit 1980s but nothing changes after all!

Of course the idea of faceless estates could be just a front for suppressed excitement. Clever and well turned David.


Ray

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