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though we kneel before you like a child

like a tantric paste daubed across the night sky 

we danced. tracing sine waves like semaphore with  

hateful eyes glistening under the dull bloom of the universe. 

lids glued shut with sleepless shrapnel, lashes meeting tear 

streaked cheeks. though we kneel before him like a child, 

he does not hear our pleas. it took a lifetime, father, for us to raise 

the white flag and kiss your swollen feet.  

 

to shun us so, how beautiful, sadistic.

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◄ shoot out the lights (haiku)

see, saw, seen, sworn ►

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Philip Stevens

Sun 10th Sep 2017 15:16

Well crafted poetry...

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Stu Buck

Wed 7th Dec 2016 15:23

cheers suki, high praise indeed to be compared to one of my favourite bands.

funnily enough, two of my favourite uses of spoken word in music are in GSYBE songs. 'the car is on fire' etc from 'dead flag blues' and the coney island, they dont sleep anymore on the beach bit from 'sleep' having said that i find it very difficult to concentrate on anything from the remainded of that album after the amazing, air raid siren style guitar solo from 'sleep' which might be my favourite 3 or so minutes of music.

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suki spangles

Wed 7th Dec 2016 14:30

Well, first of all, the title has Godspeed You Black Emperor all over it. Secondly, the poetry - this read out beneath some delay peddle feedback would be formidable. Seriously, I love the imagery here, difficult to pick out one line, but the openeng grabbed my attention. Cheers Stu!

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Stu Buck

Wed 7th Dec 2016 13:50

thanks nat!

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