brain hemorrhage
this is a new thrill:
listing of the speech
hand wired
and wired tooth-brushed heads
of a new seven-less bleeding
washed and jointed...
semi-detached property...
the pajamas's await
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this poem gives me the feeling of a loss of control and disjointedness that makes me quite uneasy. 'semi-detached' sums it up quite well, that line from my personal and subjective viewpoint is the crux of the piece for me.
Like it. Brutal and to the point, but perplex and open for question. A thought provoking one.
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tommyfazz@yahoo.com
Sat 12th Sep 2009 22:15
Nicky- Thank you for your comment; observent and 'topical' as I am in hospital 4 weeks. Your's is a difficult interperation and yours is not ease to explain!