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Filling the Void

Empty thoughts

Grasping at the heart

Numb inside

Hollow 

Fill this void

Erase this despair

Soul to soul we speak

Solemnly sweating the course

Seeking affection

Amongst the callous 

Embroidered vision of hollowed

Life

Know no more 

Scream for me

For no one can hear 

Crying out for light 

Burdened against the mellow 

Thoughts of never more 

Race one more time

Let me hear the infinite voice

Of love

Quietly I seek to shatter 

The darkness in my soul

For the work has been done

Know no more 

The thoughts of long before 

Thinking in pairs

Holding 

Gripping

Grasping 

Against the grain I seek

See the change

For I know the pain

Beneath this smile 

I deceive this world

Emphatically 

Singular objection

Tarnished memories

What I love

What I know

What I've learned

Tantrically tainted

Wrap your soul around mine

Ease my troubles

Pain no more

Blameless

For what I know is true

And deceived myself

I did

Forgive me

For I have forgiven myself

Take me back

Fill this soul with Joy

As known once before

Beneath my breath,

I breath with patience

Breath in this silence

Into one 

We go

◄ Truest to the Self

Spirit Feet ►

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Amore Vitae Ejus

Sat 7th Jan 2017 08:00

And thank you for your compliment.?

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Amore Vitae Ejus

Sat 7th Jan 2017 07:59

Becoming my truest best self with God has been a heavy burden on my relationship...As I question His will...knowing I have free will...I have made mistakes and had to forgive myself because God has already forgiven me.

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Sat 7th Jan 2017 00:09

Beautiful work...the structure is such that you are urged to continue reading to the end once you have started: a sort of slide of words.
However the line that says Tantrically tainted...Tantrically comes from tantric/tantra which I am not very much familiar with but seems to have to do with becoming one with your partner on an emotional, spiritual and sexual level...and tainted refers to having been damaged in some way from the mixture

What this lying is saying is that the two becoming one has corrupted both...maybe it's talking about fornication and the poem is a plea of forgiveness for such act plus a request to be swept up into oneness with divinity
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