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Clang!

(on drifting too close to the preacher)

 

He was no inhabitant of this world


Who hurried with such swiftness that the wind


Fluttered the rags around his lanky frame


Like tattered gonfalons...Who`s fierce eyes-


Caught fire long ago of some great vision-


Perpetually blazed...who uttered madnesses,


Words, wild words, no man could tolerate,


Full of crucifixions, dark, sad deaths


rebirths and desperate strivings for the light.


He`d hiss, with fierce whispers to the heart


Such things that, should ever action set them free


Would ruin the simple pleasure-scape of man


And leave this world a grim, volcanic waste.


Yet, many of those who listen are allured


To cast off from their comfortable nuclei


And dare the starry vastness...I myself


Had made myself immune to his fantastics


By raising up a baffle of my will

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But still I drifted over with the rest


To where he spouted forth. And for the sake


Of a sleek, fine-fetlocked faun that was listening there


(Her and her big, brown, innocent, trusting eyes)


Edged closer to him..He`d just reached


Some particular absurdity


And I, nodding sagely, started to strike up


An amiable acqaintance  with my prey,


When he stopped immediately in front of me,


Drew a mirror from within his robe,


And telling me that I was very ill


Bid me behold..........................................


...........................Hell`s cacophonous Bells!


This faun, I thought was nuzzling my neck?


........................She had me by the throat!
 

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◄ Because.

William and Benjamin ►

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 26th Jan 2017 15:08

Stu,
Many, many thanks for your more than generous comment...Sorry for the delay (I`m trying to tidy some of my stuff to get on here for my birthday)

Thanks again.

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Stu Buck

Mon 23rd Jan 2017 22:03

brilliant piece of writing harry. i could never in a million years hope to write lines that just breathe so much, that speak of pure poetry, how it used to be. i loved this.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 23rd Jan 2017 00:40

Again,
one part-pillaged in the past (so not for comp)

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