The End is Nigh
We're nearing breaking point now
Every fuck's a setting sun
On that razor wire horizon
Where all of love is done.
Comments
This is brilliant Hazel,
I must confess on the first couple of readings I read...Where all our love is done and not Where all of love is done.
I think I refer the former but it works either way.
Well done!
Excellent. Just excellent.
brilliant!!!!
every fuck's a setting sun
one of the finest lines i have read in ages.
Wow!
The fatality of love sharply expressed.
I respect your emotional and intellectual sincerity Hazel.
Raj
A poignant description of dead love Hazel.
Paul
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Hazel ettridge
Tue 14th Feb 2017 19:17
Well thank you so much for comments on my little ditty.