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HYPOCHONDRIA THE LIBERTINE

Hyponchondria the libertine

keeps you on your toes,

her ideas are top of the list

you can't ignore her woes.

 

Then she lets you off the hook

with a smack of stunned surprise

when you find that pressure spot

is just behind your eyes.

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raypool

Wed 15th Feb 2017 10:57

You're very kind . I was going to put a VD poem but being a contrary sort of person I declined. Hell, I even sent myself a card to cheer myself up. Keep up the good work. I love the freshness of your commenting , never stale or repetitive. Incidentally, two guys who never had their initials on T shirts were Vic Damone and Val Doonican.

Ray

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Paul Waring

Tue 14th Feb 2017 18:32

Ray, clever and funny, I really like this poem.

first we had those humourous VD references, now hypochondriasis....we have quite a medical vibe going on today! ?

Nice work Ray.

Paul

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