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CHELSEA CREEK 1970

Chelsea Creek is in my head

winding back through imagination

passing the scrapyard of Johnny Fenn

past the retorts of Chelsea Basin

and the teeming yards of railway trucks

diverting where the rails rise

to Cremorne Bridge and the postman's special

the southside Battersea conurbation.

 

Ducks dwell close to reeded banks

on Lots Road power station's flanks

and soon, so soon

the Marina will come

where once the barges tipped their coal

and chimneys belched

with the fires of hell.

 

At Sandford Manor Nell Gwynne resided

close by Chelsea and Fulham station

her portrait swung free from a tavern

ripped off when the brewery changed its theme

and bured a trace of the lover's dream.

 

Balloon ascents from here were common

where couples strolled by Thameside gardens

now The Balloon is a pub that survives

on Lots Road auctioneers it thrives.

 

Hereabouts on a summer day

the rising tide conceals the debris

of a barge's carcase ribbed in death

the boarding fit for frogs and spawning.

 

The Kings Road bridge divides the creek

from warehouse stumps

now nothing runs,

recollections of commercial needs

tarmacked over with the weeds.

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raypool

Sun 12th Mar 2017 16:57

Thanks for comments Stu - I think I must be a wandering fetishist, head in the past. Very pleased you approved of it!

Ray

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Stu Buck

Sun 12th Mar 2017 16:30

so much history and lovely description in your words as usual ray. as david said, anyone with any knowledge of the area cant help but be transported back there.

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raypool

Sat 11th Mar 2017 20:24

HI all you lovely commentators!
David, thanks mate. I discovered this spot via a Peter Sellers film The Optimist of Nine Elms made in 1970. I went to investigate in the late 80s before the marina and there was still dereliction and traces of industry; an old railway yard lamp swinging in the breeze and the smell of gas. All gentrified now, but the pub remains(no longer the Balloon).
Guilty as charged.
elP, it is an international feature i'm sure , America still has the diners and manned petrol stations I suppose. Thanks for taking the trip.
Col: I borrowed that line, it seemed to fit and it is powerful in Penny Lane placing it firmly in the imagination.
Cheers Paul. It's nice you and David picked up on the fondness .strange how places can be so personal to us.

Thank you all and may you all dream on!

Ray

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 11th Mar 2017 15:55

you may well be correct there Mr Waring ? Ta!

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Paul Waring

Sat 11th Mar 2017 09:33

Really enjoyable poem, Ray. Rich with historical content and memories and, for me, a sense of love and sadness about a lost past that, as David says, we old buggers love.

And, Mr Hill, as a newly returned Merseyside resident, I think the song you have in mind is Penny Lane ?

Paul

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Sat 11th Mar 2017 08:41

that first line is bugging the hell out of me - have you borrowed it from a song Ray?

elPintor

Sat 11th Mar 2017 02:29

This evoked many memories of youth spent in yet-to-be-grown American suburbs--places where no cars and no cops go.

Yet, I see now, the speckled landscapes that exist before me in older cities, and thus I see what will become of those, then, newly broken lands that existed in my youth.

It seems that all the land is doomed to domestication...

elP

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