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loving frieze

outside
your frieze
the friendly
look you take
in clothing bought from shopping malls
the browns
the greys
the fading band names
my hands beneath them
on you
your older body
in mounting time
worn in
tired
and snug

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Andy N

Fri 25th Sep 2009 23:21

i like the way you have so few words on most of the lines.. makes the flow go quicker.. clever, clever.. nice one

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Gus Jonsson

Thu 24th Sep 2009 13:35

I like this ...I like this a lot.

well done
Gusxx

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