IN AT THE DEEP END
I found my doctor a little remote
as he checked my lungs
and checked my throat.
The trouble was the blinking screen
new guru of the live well scene,
it seemed to come between us
as he consulted comparison apps
I said I was recently prone to cramps
and suffering memory lapse.
The screen came in between us
as he searched for answers online
and, offering me a flu jab while
the engine ticked,
I felt my visit was a step too far
into a deep smooth - sided jar
whose bottom not unlike my own
was bound to need checking for sediment
without a hint of sentiment,
now the seeds of doubt were sown.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Fri 7th Apr 2017 10:24
highly enjoyable - the comments too. Great stuff Ray.