MOMENT OF TRUTH
I reckon I got it figured out
the big picture, how we got here
why we're different from those early critters
who stood and couldn't figure diddly squat
you know - that blink of time
when something big came to town
from out there....
looking up I followed his gaze
Then I figured how easily you can lose your way
your mind back to being a child again
all that history counting for nothing
in your own head.
Walter, the ex NASA man took a long draught
of his bud, shifted in the rocker,
long moonlight etching his beard
just right for declarations.
Care to elaborate on that?
was my reply on that verandah
launch pad to velvet cold stars.
I know it's been thought of before
but what if something landed here
took advantage of one of those female critters
mixed their genes just for the hell of it,
how about that,
the rest would be history wouldn't it?
Then naturally enough their plans could'a gone astray
with disease an 'all, contamination and the like.
I figured it out I reckon,
and all those bible stories
the descending and the ascending and sichlike
all part of that tick tock of distant memory.
I guess you could be about right
was my reply.
Truth is, I think I may have lost the edge of late
confusion, can't remember too much
so I thought i'd let you know just in case
I might go for a walk out there an'
never come back from the bewilderness.
We parted then, and I watched his bulk
as he went inside to his simple room
where a picture of him at NASA control
said more than I could about
the leaking out of memory
with all those fine fellows smiling right out,
those colleagues he soon might
never have known.
raypool
Sat 22nd Apr 2017 21:30
I'm delighted to get feedback on this offering , to tickle the curiosity tastebuds, thank you all.
David, that clip is dead right for effect and in spirit -that leaves a big unanswered question. It seems to pull the carpet from under the film , which is what I like about the Coen brothers .
Thanks Andy - well spotted - it sort of oozed out, who knows
what words are going to come in - that's the challenge I suppose.
HI Col. You have that taped alright . I guessed your liking for the science fiction aura might come into play.
Difficult keeping up the voice -i'm not an actor, so that's another challenge!
Harry, I am highly flattered. Very stimulating response, and I see your Holmesian magnifying glass at play. I can only agree that you have extracted an essence of what I was after. The form point you make is certainly worth exploring - perhaps others more acquainted than me could work on that...
Mark: I took a chance in the conversational tone that I would take a tumble, but I thought, what the hell? The gentle and informative Alistair Cooke was a revelation of course and sadly missed. As he got old he measured his delivery for clarity, so professional. As far as the A to Z goes, perhaps it is time for more aliens with jump leads.
Bless thee selves for taking the time.
Ray
I didn't see you there Cynthia, so you have a postscript! Glad you enjoyed it and glad I was provocative. Thank you.
I think i'm right in saying that the idea of aliens coming here was taken up by Erick Von Danniken years ago and writing Chariot of the Gods - so the idea is not entirely original by any means. The book was derided at the time as being the work of an inspired crank.