TIME FLIES, NOTHING CHANGES
Bob Payne opened his door again
six years now elapsed,
looked older, nudging eighty
I guessed
oak and mahogany maintained
rugs respecting remembered silence
punctuated by a shouldering grandfather clock
spinning interior hours, days
weeks, years.
I had left his house before with
all surfaces polished.
Now I saw the rings that cups had left
a puppy's teethmarks at ankle height
that parrot still in its cage suspended
foraging the small space.
"They live to sixty" he said,
what would become of it I wondered
nothing had changed.
We exchanged pleasantries
he had suggested medication
for my nocturnal excessive urination before
an old concern lived through and survived.
His wife was still a churchwarden
(i'd remembered, he was impressed).
A hernia operation had left him with MRSA
he'd lost weight.
Light still gently entered in,
a garden cut a large swathe,
same bird feeders, strangely empty today.
"Turn right at Dovers Mead," he had said
I fretted over the A to Z
now it all came strangely back.
My mind turned its pages of time passed
grandchildren at university
house extensions built
relationships broken down,
overgrown banks of dementia
worries rising like islands
in boiling seas, lava settled.
Brambles threatened the hidden drive
nature had come back.
I left him to his paperwork
that never seems to stop.
raypool
Sat 29th Apr 2017 20:04
Thanks David Suki and Paul for your thoughts.
The reason I wrote this is how weird it felt to go back and retrace my steps after six years and to remember so much of that earlier time in detail , etched as it were. The same thing can happen I suppose in unchanged environments and can woo us in different ways with a sense of time passing.
David, sadness is something I instinctively pick up on - really it is a way of life with me. I want to heal it, but I am also a sharer of it. The setting was certainly quintessentially English and cossetted, but the parrot just seemed incongruous.
Nice compliment Suki. Sometimes I just indulge myself in detail as if constructing a stage set. It's easy to overdo it! I hope my humour is never vicious, but it is broad.
Cheers Paul. Always good to get your thoughts, which here seem to coincide with the other comments.
Jemima, how kind - you have fallen into my humour pot, but with equal respect I did try his idea of pills, but I didn't persevere long enough for it to go away. I'm anti pill really and in any case after six years I feel fairly confident. Thanks for the advice though. I havn't checked out the tenna pads ; probably more embarrassing than a teenage request for condoms. Can you be serious about the shape? Thanks.
I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem!
Ray